There is also another glitch within the game.
If anyone dislikes or disagrees with these changes then feel free to change them back. I made a lot of revisions to the article including: Removing information that was only helpful to those who play the game, Re-arranging some sections, expanding on the animals to make their sections less list-like, and removing the 'minor' characters that were listed. I removed both tags because i think they're untrue now put them back if you feel they still belong. Is the article cleaned-up enough to remove the tags? Is the secrets and glitches sections really necessary, otherwise I beleive someone should delete it. Should the last level be 'Golden Eggs' or 'P Eggs'? I wasn't sure when I was editing. James Delgado 04:02, 12 January 2007 (UTC) Chickens To start off, the intro has unnecessary information about differences and plot, when really it should be a short summary about the game's style and basics, i.e. The preceding unsigned comment was added by James Delgado ( talk If Maplestory gets a tag stating that Wikipedia is not a guide, then so should this article. One does not really need to know the amount of hearts required to get a large wool. Frid 21:29, 25 July 2006 (UTC) MAJOR Clean up needed Īll right, it seems as if this thing is turning more into a guide than an actual article concerning the game. If anyone is for some reason displeased, talk to me about it and we can fix it. I added a few bits of information to some of the girls' sections. I also rewrote a few sections, mostly just rewording them. So I have taken out the "you" references and replaced them with "the player", "the character", or "your character" (The latter, I was a bit iffy about, so I might change that too at another time.) Anonymouse 11:33, 10 October 2006 (UTC) Article Revision Īs anyone who looked at the history knows, I've done quite a bit of revision to this article, mostly because I saw that it didn't read like a real encyclopedia article might. Gray Porpoise 22:45, 19 September 2006 (UTC) Somebody needs to add Manna and the other housewife to the characters section. dootsie 09:34, 25 August 2006 (UTC) I revised it, and will check back on it later. Someone who is more well-versed on the Wiki end might want to review and revise this, for integrity's sake. The overall tone of large chunks of it is not appropriate for an encyclopedia article, and I wonder if it belongs here. This is entirely opinion, but it seems to me as if some of this was copied directly from some sort of how-to game guide. If there is a serious problem with any of that, by all means, correct it. I also worked a bit with some phrasing that was hard to follow. I changed most of them to "the player" or "the character" and followed up with subsequent subject-verb agreements. I, too, edited quite a bit on the "you" and "your" inclusions. It's supposed to give info about the game, not gameplay hints and the like. Granted, Wikipedia is too picky however this article seems far more like a FAQ rather than an encyclopedia article. Preceding unsigned comment added by 69.165.18.229 ( talk The fishing rod description is SERIOUSLY messed up.Moved to talk page from article.- Konstable 22:54, 29 June 2006 (UTC) Improper or not, I've never cared for having to conform to overly stiff and proper standards.